Underberger_InClass_May23_Revisions

When considering using the thesis/main claim revision idea for my final drafts, I figured it could work in the following ways. First, by accurately reviewing my thesis statement and its clarity, I can adjust the entire statement of the paper. By adjusting the clarity of a paper, it can emphasize a topic and support it with unprecedented evidence. This can also lead to the following material that is presented in the paper. Having a good introduction with a clear purpose that highlights the rest of the paper ensures that reader stays informed. Also when using quotations or examples, proving the validity of the source makes a much larger impact in the impression of the paper. In a sense, it adds an extra layer of support to help keep the paper strong. When writing the conclusion, I should also take into account the relationship between the introduction and the conclusion. If the two are properly linked, it shows that the entire paper maintained a specific course outlined by the body. Overall I think that these techniques would greatly help edit my papers.