Elliott_in class revision ideas

In my first paper, the research one, I do state my claim rather clearly and concisely. However, I do need to include where I will be taking my argument and what kind of material my paper will have in it.

In terms of my review of literature I give a clear statement of what they are arguing, however, I need to include the ways that the writers persuade their audience to believe their argument.

I definitely need to put some more work into my conclusion through including my main argument again as well as a discussion on the importance of my argument. I need to re-emphasize the importance of my argument and how I argued this point.