Howe_In Class_Revision_Exercise

In my first paper, I clearly make my main claim or thesis of the paper. I could make some changes by giving more examples that help show the readers what is to come in my paper. I also will need to make sure that all of my quotations are fluvial with the rest of the piece. Another main problem with my quotations is I give the “What” of the contents of the literature but fail to explain “How” the writer uses the piece and how it is persuasive. I must be careful while giving examples to not have any disconnects with my audience and to make sure that I carefully explain everything so it is easily understandable. In addition to this I must be careful to not include any information without citing a source as proof of my statements. Along with this idea I have little proof of any of the author’s credibility and why the reader should trust this source and how their research directly relates to my paper.