Jennessa Lever In-Class Revision Exercise

For the Text-Based Research paper I plan on doing more analysis on my quotes and references. This will be done in order to help the reader understand more of where the author (myself) is coming from in the reasons I used to quotes and references I did. Through these revisions I hope to make sure that there is a common understanding between the reader and the author as to why the paper was written for more than the reason that it was assigned. Hopefully the paper will become better written and easily understandable through the revisions I will make. Through the increased analysis there will be greater knowledge of the topic distributed to the reader as they read the paper. Hopefully this will bring not just a greater understanding of the topic, but also a common interest for the reader to the topic being discussed. This is important for me as an author and a reader, to be able to relate to the topic at hand.