Revision Exercises - Bao Le

For my first paper, the Analysis bullet point makes some good points as to how I will go about revising this. My sources for this paper are introduced without much background as to where the sources are coming from and how credible they are. Because of these deficiencies, the ethos of my sources and ultimately my paper might be put into question. This can become a potentially serious issue in my paper because nobody will actually read it if the paper itself has no ethos. Also, analyzing my sources in such a way will also help me come to more definite conclusions as to whether they should be included in the paper or not. Doing this will hopefully eliminate some of the extraneous fluff.