There are many things I can correct on my papers for the portfolio. On my second paper I need to look at how I present my arguments when analyzing the data I gathered from my survey and from research. I used several specific examples and statistics without ever going into detail about how that effects the common views of immigration. Also, I failed to properly cite my sources in both papers, which I need to look for. I need to take examples from my research and connect it to my findings, in my immigration paper the research talks about current laws however I never discuss how the participants answers shed light on those laws.
In my mountain pine beetle paper I failed really go beyond simply explaining the current situation and its impact on Colorado. I need to go into further detail on how the public is impacted by this by getting away from facts and more into opinion.
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