Andy Thomas In-class writing revision exercise

I feel that when revising my writing I could improve on the analysis of my sources and my discussion of them. I have noticed that in research project, both for this class and others, I often use sources with little or no discussion of what they are or who is writing them. I feel that I could spend more time explaining where these sources are coming from and why they are credible. I believe that this would improve my writing both by improving my own credibility as a researcher, but also in providing greater depth to my use of sources and data. This is something that I plan to pay particular attention to in my revisions of my text-based research paper. I found that this essay in particular relied on citied sources and likely could have been improved by including more discussion of outside sources.