AdriannaRomero_InClass_RevisionExercise

Adrianna Romero

After reading Revision Exercise Worksheet I have decided to work on the analysis part of my paper. I would like to start with the citations within my paper. Some of them are not exactly MLA style and they need to be revised. Taking a second look at the works cited part of my paper might also be helpful. Next, I feel like my qualitative paper does a fair job at presenting the results of my interviews but then does not develop the analysis very well. I need to go back and examine what my results mean and why the students may have responded in the way that they did. By looking at my analysis again, the discussion part of my paper would also improve. In all I feel like my paper is a fair introduction to my topic but it could be improved upon to be a more collective and comprehensive examination of student opinion.