Mazurek_In-Class_Revision_Ideas

Qualitative Paper Revision Ideas:

I will go back and rework my introduction paragraph and strengthen my argument. This will allow my revision to start out much stronger and thus be more effective. When discussing the sources that I use to support my argument, I need to go back and discuss not only what the sources say, but also how they specifically apply to my argument and how they strengthen it. I also need to rework my implications for further research in order to provide a thought-provoking conclusion in order to be able to eliminate my conclusion paragraph and avoid the repetitive way in which I originally ended the paper.