Text-Based Revisions_Grencik

For the first essay (text-based research), I definitely have some changes to the analysis section of the paper. Some of my ideas are a little bit unorganized and just need to be cut and pasted into another section where it fits better, and others need to be re-worded, and cited. This will ultimately help the reader to better follow my paper and get an understanding of my thesis. For example, in one section I jump from talking about how some of the Mexican government is corrupt, then jump into the economics, and back to an example from a source that shows the government is partially corrupt. Furthermore I will work on my transitions to make the paper flow better, whereas currently the reader may get lost and not see the connection between two points that I make. Finally, I will re-connect my main points and summarize my analysis in my conclusion to reiterate my argument throughout the paper.