There are many corrections that my qualitative paper could go through. Right off the bat, I have a problem with my hypothesis and research question. The beginning paragraph becomes too “bland”, the paper does not actively engage the reader, but rather sounds just like another assignment. In order to fix this I must rephrase the question and eliminate the colon. The question needs to read more casually, less clunky, and be able to sound more like something that would want to be read.
After this, I have an issue with organization. I begin rephrasing the purpose of this paper and how anonymity was kept at the end of the first paragraph. This section should most likely be moved to within the methods or immediately before, this will help the paragraphs flow better and sound less choppy. Throughout the paper I have a mess of citations, however, do not properly cite them. I need to return and go through the paper to connect citations to the information they should be linked to. Toward the end of my paper I need to critically analyze my results and come up with a discussion that finds a profound meaning from the research conducted.
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