Dear Reader,
This essay will cover diet in colleges and students perception of the school food they eat everyday. I want to raise awareness on how a persons diet can severely affect overall health and happiness while observing what students currently perceive they are eating.
I will do a tally and observe how many people use one dining hall on any specific night. As students leave, I will ask them brief questions on the quality of food they just ate and what could be done to improve. I will also ask students how important dorm food is to them.
Finally, I will provide solutions to a better diet and a more healthy, edible meal that we have already paid for.
Reed Kinning
Overall, I do feel that your process note is effective. Your main point is fairly clear and to the point. First off, I did find that the direction of your introduction is very useful to your developing your idea for your audience.
ReplyDeleteYour methods in the terms of observing how many people use one dining hall in one night and making a tally for each individual might be difficult to coduct accurately. This may provide you with some holes because it you would need to get close to a tally of each person at food halls that are quite far away from each other in one night.