Dear Reader,
Religion is based off of faith and beliefs in practices and traditions. I am curious to how an individual forms an opinion on religion and how that belief is connected to the traditions and expectations of the individual’s family’s religious affiliation. In this project I will conduct several interviews and use the support of three scholarly sources to show the links and the causes to why people believe or do not believe in religion and, or God. I will do this by interviewing a skeptic, a devote Catholic, a non-traditional episcopal, and agnostic, and an atheist. I will analyze much of the parent’s experience with religion and how religion has played into family life. Then I will reflect on the current believes of individuals, when relating to their families experience with religion. The overall purpose of the experiment is to determine whether how people form religious affiliations and whether people believe in religion and, or God for personal fulfillment or because of the traditions and expectations of family members.
Ali Bland
I think you really picked a good topic to examine in your essay. I like how you “introduced” the topic in the process note and defined religion. The word choice is effective in introducing your topic of interest for the essay. However, in you process note you didn’t discuss where you will conduct the research and did not say anything about the interviewees (Catholic, atheist, and agnostic, and others). You are aiming at getting different perspectives from many religions in order to conclude on your research question? Then say that directly in the process note. And how does the parent’s experience relate to your research question? If it does relate, include that in the research question and the introduction of the process note. And why did you name this an experiment? Otherwise, the process note seems to be clear in its goals for the essay. Yes, your essay lives up to the promise of the process note. Just make sure to stay on the topic and your research question: which in my opinion is one of the hardest things to do.
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