Dear Reader,
I have written this essay in order to determine how the immigration should be dealt with in the United States. While the united states currently has a policies and practices for bring immigrants into the united states, the survey I have conducted gauges possible improvements to the existing system. The main reason for writing this was to determine the best course of action in dealing with immigration.
The issue of immigration is of interest to me since I have the opinion that the system could use some improvement. This issue has also been very popular lately with the violence in Mexico and Arizona. In order to gauge how others feel immigration should be dealt with I built the questionnaire to garner various solutions or lack there of.
The results of my questionnaire combined with the solutions that have already been researched should provide a good overall view of what citizens feel should be done to improve the immigration policy.
Signed,
Brendan William Hickey
Brendan,
ReplyDeleteGood job on your process note. You did a good job of painting the picture of what your paper is going to be about but i believe it would help you if you included more about the details of your paper. What i mean by this is that you should include why you decided to write about this, as well as how you will be gathering your data. Also it would help to include a brief discussion of your audience. Also you should include how you gathered your data and what kinds of people did you gather data from? Other than that, good job and just remember to include your audience and a little more about how you chose your topic and how you gathered your data.
Thanks,
Jeff