Revision Process - Martin Corral

Lupe Fiasco

This revision process helped to remind me that, my group will have to make use of many different methods until we find a method of revision that works well for all of us. In this piece Fiasco talks about the different ways in which rappers come up with their lyrics, including different positions, using music, or not. This is useful because when we come together as a group to write this project, we need to take into account that we have different revision processes. Our group needs to acknowledge each other’s revision processes to find weaknesses, as well as implement other team members’ review processes to form a better final project.

J Mays

This particular artist has a very common approach to writing papers, though he uses it to design vehicles. First he designs the car with the basic attributes that he wants it to have, later he adds to the vehicle to upscale it and make it look better, finally he compares it to others to decide whether it is a worthy competitor. This will be necessary for our group because we need to fulfill the requirements, then utilize our writing skills to shape it and make it look good. Finally we need to compare it to previous works and see if the paper is satisfactory and will be worthy to turn in.

Grant Achatz

This Chef takes a reverse approach to the creation of a piece. He first takes the piece, strips it down to its essentials, and looks at the basic information. This is an invaluable technique to consider. When our team paper is done, we should definitely take the piece apart and see if it truly is what we originally wanted it to be, and if not, is it better? Taking this paper apart will help us have an extra revision and be able to take the paper to the next level.